Roy,

This has a nice sound to it, good contemporary melody to ita lot of good to work with here. Generally, in reading the comments, I tend to agree with Vics feedback in a lot of respects.I particularly like the idea of changing Gone is the Wonderland to 
Looking for the Wonderlandand its most probably a reference Im unfamiliar with, but not sure what to make of win myself a gong. But regardless, there are some beautiful lines herelove, simply love, the last two lines of that bridge. Not sure if you consider this a finished work. Its solid as it stands; but if you are up for tinkering, just my two cents to consider.

Wishing you the best,

Deej