Marvin,

Great hook! You are such an amazing lyricist. How can you beat a good production from a studio? The singer is really good and emotes the lyric really well. I wonder if I, as a woman would connect more to the song of a woman liberated if a woman sang it....that is a thought that did come to me...I think it is a great idea to try both and see which one takes. One suggestion, I like the "dialing" at the end, but it is pretty loud, if you do another version, I would be aware of how loud it is because it is a bit piercing" Just my opinion. Always a pleasure to listen to your songs Marvin, they are always top notch!!

Tammy

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