Superlative enunciation! I got the words, the story, 97% the first time through. The effectiveness of 'reporting back' to the title, THE Hook, ending each Verse ties it all together well. Dylanesque. I'd buy this! The Singer-Character is apparent. The Love-Interest Character is realistic. Rhythm, Rhyme, storyline, poetry. Splendid!
I'm carrying a link to my Facebook page to share with those who I think will enjoy it too.
Second listen. Third will have my complete attention.

Last edited by Gary E. Andrews; 11/24/19 12:26 PM.

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