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by Gary E. Andrews - 07/24/26 08:58 PM
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Hello Travis david,
I like the lyric too. cold/warm themes could be a metephor for renewed love.
I just worked on your verse meter a bit:
So happy for this love, that we'd (lost then) found
treading carefully first, this second time around
Bill
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