Carroll,

I was a bit skeptical . . . the title, the lyric, left me wondering how this might work. Cool opening, and then that terrific vocal and haunting melody. Great effects (that continual clock ticking) that really accentuate the lyric. Great job by Andrew. If I had a suggestion it would be half the bridge . . . coming off the Ive weathered war verse, it bogs down just a little for me. A subjective opinion, but something to consideruse or lose.

But really ambitious, wonderfully executed tune. Very impressed!

All my best,

Deej

P.S. You are building quite the stable of fine collaboratorsreally nice job networking to get your lyrics out there. Something is going to hit one of these days . . . or so I hope for you.