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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: May 2015
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I wrote this awhile back, and I had an epiphany on how to take it to the next level. So, I redid it, and here it is! All critiques welcome, good or bad. COLD GREY EYESCold grey eyes tell your lies Subtle ways can't deny Pretty face, such a waste It aint satisfaction, it's a disgrace There you go again, he's just a friend But I don't care where you been Cold Grey Eyes! Do you amuse your men? Cold Grey Eyes! Is it spite? Cold Grey Eyes! Cut me deep again... Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night You say you want freedom and I gave you chains But isn't that too easy, say I'm to blame I gave you love and held you up when you were sinking down Saved by those chains, you fought to be bound I see the fire burning deep in your eyes Beneath the veil of ice that hides your desires Cold Grey Eyes! Do you abuse your men? Cold Grey Eyes! Is it spite? Cold Grey Eyes! Break my heart again... Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night Cold Grey Eyes! Just leave me alone in the night
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