Hello, Mackie. I hope the covid was not a bad case like others I have heard from. I like the simplicity of this lyric but stumbled when trying to read/sing it out loud, as I sometimes do. Also, I think another verse before the chorus to explain what is going on between the singer and his lover. As always, keep or sweep. Thank you for sharing. smile


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