Originally Posted by Andy Kemp
Hi Guys I've got to say the vocals are my fav part and I can hear it with more of a "Nick Cave and the Bad Seeds" production.

The pre-chorus chords need some work as the vocal is doing something really cool but the guitar is staying pretty static.
It needs to add more tension before the chorus.

All my little nits overall the song is a cool work tape. Nice one guys.

Glad you liked it, I like it this way, Raw without a bunch of production, It's the way I saw it in my head. Didn't think the subject matter was fit for a Karen Carpenter type vocal and production. Thanks again