Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
That's a good line, but followed by
If I can't say I love you, I dont wanna talk at all."

Main point is that's your only sing

Shifting the goal post again Dom.
Main point is that I write my own lyrics, structure my own chords and sing my own songs to the best of my ability.

You do not. Machinery that you cannot even comprehend does it for you.

As for your lyrics, they're fine.
Better than 99 percent of what you throw at the site. But nowhere in them is anything with the finesse of
"The distance in your words dropped like dead leaves in fall."

You don't possess finesse.
People cant be good who think that they are great...but arent.

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