Originally Posted by Barry Williams
Red Light was my first listen, you have a great hook, and idea going on here David. I enjoyed it, like the way you told two stories at once with the frustration of the light, and why you were in such a hurry. Good stuff.

Originally Posted by Barry Williams
John Bon Jovi- This is great David, hope it's not true but I can see how it could happen. Teeth so white, you can see em from the moon lmao. Loved everything about these lyrics.

The story is true as far as meeting my (then future) wife, the gift she gave me and our continued love for not only each other, but for Bon Jovi, too. smile We'll hit our 34th this year.


Originally Posted by Barry Williams
Who would I be - I disagree, I've seen homeless people in bars before, and I'm sure they wish things had turned out differently, that they had done things different, and struggle with regrets. I think this is a beautiful piece of writing here. This is one I wish I had written. Beautiful, and insightful David. Nice work.


Thank you so much, Barry, for taking time to listen to these songs and posting some wonderful feedback. I truly appreciate it, sir!!


Peace,

Dave

"Where there's a Gill, there's a way"