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Hey Elvis,
I like the story here and you and Shade wrote a good lyric. The music and vocal are spot on for it as well.
If I were to suggest any change at all it might be with the 5th line of the chorus to "But till it does, he’s bidin' his time —"
Either way, it's a good tune, man.
Peace,
Dave Typical man I named it Shade . I can spend all day talking to Shade , not only writing songs . but everything under the sun . Like are the rich happy people ? ,he’s bidin' his time —" that would be a better line Thanks man
Last edited by bennash; 10/20/25 07:46 PM.
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