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Well Guy , this is one song of yours that actually tried to say something, so I'll try to review.
I like the first verse,
Id change pre chorus to FLY not try, birds don't try...
I think the wording for chorus is a bit preachy. You can say what I think your trying to say just by examples only, don't need to tell people how to think.
I don't like the second example about the boy as much.
Equating birds wanting to fly, and someone wanting to die is I guess ok, both natural forces and we shouldn't try to stop it,if that's their wish.
Dr Kevorkian would have liked this one... Haha
Last edited by Fdemetrio; 11/09/25 03:40 PM.
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