Soon forgot about you, was glad to forget, then came the night.


Verses should have the same number of lines, since your chorus is so long, keep the verses to 4 lines cus the listener just wants to sing the chorus. Just my opinion.


"strife is a weird word" (smile)

Last edited by Kay-lynn Carew; 12/26/25 11:48 PM.

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