Originally Posted by Fdemetrio
Lol let it be and born in the USA.

The hook repeating is fine, yours is "the language of your eyes"

Not eyes, ..

Its not that I didn't understand the story.

Doesn't have to be a story.

But the language of your eyes is vaguely supported in your song.

And is over kill on the ears, honest to God it was the first thought I had...why so many eyes



Why don't you sing one and show everyone's how its done Dom. Even that lawyer backs it up when she cuts tracks

Last edited by bennash; Yesterday at 08:44 PM.

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