I like the music and lyric matchup.

I first read the lyric, and was unsure of the structure, and how it might work in music. The images jumped around some, but in the end, I was suitably depressed, as the content intended?

I didn’t listen to the music. Walked away from it. Had breakfast. Then thought, I just wonder what you, the writer, will have Suno do….how you will get AI music to follow your music idea, and how your music idea will mesh with the emotion of the words.

I liked the music a lot. I think if you sing it like that, it works. It makes me think, that singer musician has got this, and it’s just a matter of time before, what could have been……will actually be!