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by Gary E. Andrews - 10/19/26 09:48 PM
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Came back to this for a closer look Rob
Nice song but I think what I caught was an overabundance of simple rhymes that were there for the sake of rhyming...it turned "the lyric scan" into a "meh" and restricted what you could do with this
Love the premise but then you set up coincidental meetings...and then it ends on two "meh" choruses
I feel you only scratched the surface of where you could take this.
If writing ever becomes work I think I'm going to have to stop
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