HI Joe! How are you my friend? Hope all is well and that you're stronger than ever after your health battle.

This song hit me as being a Cat Stevens song. And that's not just from the voice, but the sentimen and the fine playing of everything. The second listen put me in a trance, as I just stared at the screen, thinking, "this is different from what you usually do". (your usual Les Paul work).

I like your simple yet effective bass playing. (The fifths are nice,,,some thirds maybe?).

Anyway, very beauitful playing by Dan. Tasty stuff!

For any mainstream efforts, if any, I would like to hear this go to a chorus to really bring home the song's feeling. But that is something up for debate.

How about film placement? This would go great in many scenes, as I was talking on the phone with "Sub" about this very type of lyric two nights ago. He has five songs in an upcoming major film in the fall, and he said that the trick for film placement is not to be naming places, genders, time of day,,,,,anything that would tag the song for a specific image. The scene will do that. Your lyric is meaninful without being specific, which is great for film scenes of just about any serious situation.

Congrats on a good collaboration! Good to be diverse, and this sure did that for you!

Take good care of yourself, so we can hear much more of your future work.

John Daubert

[This message has been edited by dhsongs (edited 08-03-2005).]

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