I'd like to know if this is ready to start pitching. This is my first try at digital recording. If anyone has any advice on arrangement, production and improving the sound quality of the recording, I'd really appreciate it. I'm using Cakewalk Pro Audio 9 and recording everything directly through my pc's sound card.
I've posted the mp3 on both Soundclick and Songramp.
Thanks in advance.
-Todd

http://www.soundclick.com/toddcody

http://www.songramp.com/homepage.ez?Who=tcody13

NEW RELIGION
© Todd Cody

There’s the barstool in the corner where I used to sit and pray
With a bottle, under neon I‘d worship everyday
The barkeep listened to me while I confessed my sins
Then accepted my donation and filled my glass again

But now those days are over I’m not the man I used to be
There’s no salvation in a bottle, no miracles to see
My drinkin’ days have ended, I’m sober through and through
‘Cause I’ve found a new religion loving you

Chorus:
I’ve found a new religion loving you
I’ve taken all my vows, changed my point of view
I saw the light, I’m born again, it’s a miracle come true
‘Cause I’ve found a new religion loving you

The jukebox was our choir, it played all the drinkin’ songs
The entire congregation would dance or sing along
When the services were over I’d stumble home and then
Sleep it off ‘till mornin’ when I could worship once again

Bridge:
I kept the faith for years until you helped me understand
Neon ain’t the guiding light that’ll take me to the Promised Land

Now those days are over I’m not the man I used to be
There’s no salvation in a bottle, no miracles to see
My drinkin’ days have ended, I’m sober through and through
‘Cause I’ve found a new religion loving you

Chorus:
I’ve found a new religion loving you
I’ve taken all my vows, changed my point of view
I saw the light, I’m born again, it’s a miracle come true
‘Cause I’ve found a new religion loving you

Oh, I saw the light, I’m born again, it’s a miracle come true
‘Cause I’ve found a new religion loving you
Loving you