Lovely song, Kaley. I thoroughly enjoy your children's songs. Just a thought, which isn't a nit-pick, honest: I wonder if you could make more of the fact that they're all actually arguing over who is portrayed in the pond? You know, taking it in turns to look and saying "it isn't you...it's me" (only in a way that fits into the song, of course). It doesn't actually need it though.

Ron.


The way to lead the people is to first find out where the people are going....then get in front.