Corey

You didn't have to write this just because you stated you were observant on my post. I'm sure she still loves you anyway.

Nice write as usual and it has some easy to perceive images.
Not much of a story like a lot of your stuff but a good write. Chorus has been done before but then it didn't take a skydiver to get the idea across.....Lotsa brownie points in this one!

Good writing.

Eric


If you're going to judge someone, do it on the side of mercy.