Hi Hector,

You'll have better luck getting feedback if you post these (one at a time with the lyric name in the title of the post) on one of the 3 Lyric Feedback boards. That is what they are there for. It's unlikely you'll get any critiques or feedback (if that is what you want) on this one.

Brian


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