HiDee ShayneSter!

Nice Song! Couplea Suggestions:

"To my DULL black & white world"
"& I love IT when you whisper"

Refrain Line'd shorten to:
"& I know if I let you go/I'D be.. (Delete-the) Fool of The Year."

Bridge: "No chance in love I could receive" is kinda Yodaspeak..IMO...
"A Love Award I'll never receive" WOULD do da Job fairly Nicely..IMO again. (K-O-S Alla these Suggestions, of course!)

Tag: & I know if I let you go/
I'd be THE BIGGEST..Fool of The Year~!

Good Angle..overall "KUDOS"..says what Gals LIKE T'Hear... ;-)>

Good Luck wit It, Amigo~
Big Christmas-y Guy-Hug,
Stan