Ben,

First, glad you're still here to give us the pleasure of your finely crafted lyrics, and, even more importantly, so your family can still have you at hand rather only in their hearts.

No real nits on the lyric, per se. Nicely done.

Never experienced anything similar to this. Closest thing was in Viet Nam in Feb of 1966. A grenade went off within a few feet of me knocking me unconscieous for a while. When I woke up, had only a few pieces of shrapnel in my face. That's not nearly as traumatic as your experience.

Keep them fine lyrics a coming!

Alan

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