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Hi Charlann,
You've got a good story. If the first two sections are verses one and two, seems they'd be tough to sing to the same melody. I take the section after the first C to be a bridge?
The main problem with the story I'd see is that "I'm coming home to you'----if it's been twenty years, looks like she could expect things to be entirely different by then as far as "coming home to you"
I'll try to get back and see if you explain it a bit
Wy
Last edited by Wyman Lloyd; 01/24/07 01:13 AM.
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