Hi Todd,

Welcome to JPF, nice to meet ya.
Sad story that a lot could relate too.
I only have one small nit....
Instead of this....
It hurts that I can’t hold you the way a woman should be held
By arms that never want to let her go

How bout this...
It hurts that I can’t hold you the way a woman should be held
By arms that never want to let (YOU) go

Have a good day.


Calvin


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/calvinstewart