Hi Nicodemus,

Come to think of it. It did occur to me later that a song could be written about the musings of a guy before a special date. I forget what that POV is called. I thought it was interesting listening in on the singer's thoughts. It will need to be clear though that the girl isn't listening in or hearing the private thoughts though IMO. Hope that helps. Listen to/analyze as many lyrics similar to what you are trying to write as you can. And good luck. Glad I could be of help. Hopefully, you'll get some other opinions too. The more varied and diverse, the better. smile

Vanessa