Hi Stan

Well there's nothing wrong with simple sometimes it's good!...I think I would chenge these line to something else and leave the 'Christmas' to the refrain part alone...

We walk Together
In The Snow
See COLORED LIGHTS
ON Trees Aglow!

The FESTIVE Music
Makes Our Hearts Rise
I See The Spirit..In Your Eyes
You Make This Winter..Paradise!

Frankly, I'm not sure the 18-25 yr old market Will like this type of song, but I think it is a nice one for the season. Good luck with it smile jm


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