It's long at 4:31 as I recall Muskie. The intro could be cut in half but that's only about 7 seconds. The instrumental interlude takes some time. Playing live, all this is fine. For radio airplay, it would cut into their commercial time.
The lyric doesn't seem to hook me with a compelling story, although it rhymes well enough. The first line is longer than others and the word "Just" isn't clear, losing 'hook factor' from the very beginning. It may be a matter of enunciating more clearly or dropping that word altogether. "Face Of Love" might be a more prominent phrase, occupying the strategic last line of the chorus, and being the result of the 'flying,' thereby earning the title honor.

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