Bob,

This is a very nice song. I think most of us can see through the rough cut deep enough to see and hear the quality of the composition. I agree with Scott about the harmony...using it on only the 1st and 3rd lines. That would keep the chorus constantly refreshed. I'm not one to quibble about a title that has been used before, or one that is very similar. Heck, I recently wrote a crying in your beer, honky tonk country song called "Hit Me With Your Best Shot". I really don't think anyone is going to confuse the two! Go with the title that works best for you. Nice song!

Alan