My experience is that the songs I have trouble remembering the lyrics to don't have an obvious flow to the lyrics. The lyrics may be cool, but there is no obvious flow and the lyric lines are pretty much interchangeable. So I try to write lyrics that flow better, where one line obviously leads to the next. Try is the key word, as I still often don't succeed.


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