Hey Couch

While i certainly enjoyed the story in poem form. And I do appreciate the darkness in this one(almost reminds me of poe) I think the subject matter is a little strong. Might wanna at least warn people before they get to reading it. Just a suggestion not meaning any offense and I'm sure you probably feel the same way about Stan's lyrics but some of the crassness that was here was unnecessary. Other than that I felt it was well done!
Sincere Blessings
Derek

Last edited by Derek Hines; 10/20/07 12:51 PM.

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