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Hi Calvin,
I haven't been around much lately, but for good reasons. Son is doing well, and I've just been busy with other things and work.
This is a great hook and lyric as always. The only thing that stuck out for me is that the first verse didn't really lead well into the chorus. What makes her an angel? I wonder if you started the first verse with:
"It's like heaven in my mind"
and kept the rest of it. Then to me, the "angel" part
would work better. It does flow so nicely and even though
I can't write a note of music, I can almost "hear" it!!!
Nice to see you again.
Diane
Diane Ewing
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