This is a sweet little song Clint...i always admire your pickin type playing..you are one of the best i have heard on here..well written lyric..no obvious pitch problems but i do hear it as near your vocal limit..slight variation on timing here and there,but that is to be expected as you say you are not using a metronome..but that would'nt be an issue at the end of the day..If you want to take this song to the next level,which i think it deserves,it is screaming out for a female vocalist..it reads to me, as a female lyric as well...funny how some songs turn out that way...but in any case well done..i wish you all the best.....Terry...