Wendy,

this is written and performed beautifully...i'm fascinated by the lines below, how they so gently imply an unwarranted, untimely or self-destructive ending

It must have seemed like freedom
That bright and shining lie

Oh, little bird...
Your wings have been broken

But you couldn't know
Just what it was spawning


only suggestion...it could use a stronger ending

..ant


My albums "Rhythms of Life" and "Out On The Road" are on Bandcamp, Spotify and Apple Music.