Keith....DO NOT....stop on this one....I love the meter and flow of it SO much....sang in my head perfectly....I second and third everything that Gary said and more....just lose libertine... reminded me too much of THE MUSIC MAN, which I sang in...in High School...you'd have a hard time finding an older than young gal to say that....another word would make it more contemporary.

That said, if this is done right...a waltz could still fly.

Just love the lyric....Jan