Good singing (is it just me or are we having a rash of good singers joining the JPF?). I didn't really follow the story line at all, but that isn't too important.

One thing to look at: the "s", "sh" and "t" sounds were exploding on the recording. Need to find a way to cut back on that in your recordings.

Kevin


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