Hey Kristi, there are soem great images here. The wooden face seems to stop the flow for me. Until then it's all soft, in my interpretation, and then a tree, right in the middle of the river. That's the only thing I see that isn't quite catching me right. Every other word, is perfectly in place for the story and feelings, imo.

Great writing!


Caroline


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