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Goldroom
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/08/26 01:40 PM
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SOMA
by Gary E. Andrews - 10/07/26 11:11 PM
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Toxic
by Rob B. - 10/04/26 02:16 PM
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Joined: Aug 2008
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This is lovely, Kristi.  (I like the unusual structure, as I'm playing a bit with that myself. ) I agree with Caroline about 'wooden face'. Perhaps a word like 'careful' would be better in this context. Good suggestions from Beth as well with regard to setting up a contrast. I like the hook/title. It's reminiscent of the wonderful 'Gentle on My Mind', but conveys just the opposite. Donna
Honour the Earth. Without it, we'd be nowhere.
Life is too important to take seriously.
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