les_paul_gurl: Thank you- you are kind.This is a rewrite. My new music is somewhat better- but as you, know my choruses keep my songs from reaching their expectations.Yet I'm focus to have fun and to be content with progress no matter how small the steps. I do feel good when I see my lyrics make a lot of people also having fun with the stories; really that's what they are- songs we can relate to- That's my interpretation and my aim. Thank you and I know you love music and are a seasoned professional- your input is appreciated. I see your name quite a while.