Hi Magne,

This is an interesting read. You bring this girl to life, that’s for sure! She’s so tough though, that I wonder how real she is…don’t know if you’re looking to making her more dimensional or not. But if you changed “from” to “for” in the last two lines of the chorus…

Yeah they’re happy to die
For a BAD BLOOD GIRL

I wonder if that would show how she’s so good, she’s bad, rather than she’s so bad, she’s bad. Ya know? Might add a little something...maybe not, just an idea. I also wonder about this line: Gonna tear up these towns ….It’s a general statement and I don’t know what that means in terms of what she wants. Just thinking out loud really. There’s definite attitude here, and only you know how far you want to go with that.

Good luck with it!

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist