Hi Gary,

This opens like a song with great potential. Some slick in-line in lyric hooks
and a kickin' country vibe.
First two verses and the chorus is all I've read so far but I saw one thing I
would change, even though my contributions are considered comments --
like, what am I doin' here! grin

Now where's that line I wanted to alter. . .
2nd last line of verse 2

She knows how to curl my bacon without a single move
And when we’re under the big moon she quivers my cowboy boots
She'll be my oasis in AN unkind atmosphere
WHEN THE SKY IS dark or cloudy she’ll BE THERE TO MAKE IT clear

Making it clear gives an added impression or weight to the existing one . . .
more weight than what was there I think.

Listen to me. . . I'm a bloody salesman
Workin' for nothin'
It's about time. . . I started hustling
To the exit
Music man smile

Cheers