Terrill:

Well done. On my initial read through of the lyrics, I thought they were fresh, tight and polished. (I was a little concerned about the "Big, brown eyes" line, but that sang just beautifully.) The lyrics were nicely matched by the music and the production, while simple, was well done and tasteful. My only complaint was that the song seemed to short. Good complaint, though, isn't it?

Nice job. (And welcome back.)

Mark

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