Oh, I see it now!! I read through this three times before I finally started to read some responses. Something wasn't right and I couldn't quite figure it out. Thank you Joice! That's exactly what it is, that one line, and I see Jan had an issue with it too, so I see it will be fixed for those of us who failed to miss the point, lol!!!

Love the story, wish you could compact it a touch, sounds like a slow to mid tempo, but at this rate, may have to be uptempo to get it all in. We'll see, mayube I'm just reading slower than usual.


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