this is a really creative tune, i like it. because the lyrics are so original and fun and unique in terms of word choice, i found myself craving some variety in the pacing, like a slew of choppy stocatto really fast words to show them off a bit...you could do this on the choruses, just add like twice as many words and sing them fast and choppy. i wish i had an example...

that choppy, fast, punctuated words would play nicely off the toms, too. they could do a sort of duet.

thanks for sharing this.

Last edited by babette; 07/05/09 02:51 PM.