Originally Posted by Michael Zaneski
Hi Steve,

Every melodic fragment sounds like a hook, it's very pretty.

It does need something like a strong vocal or lead instrument to give it more distinction, this is a nice start.

Mike


Hi Mike,

Thanks for for listening and your keen observations. I'm resisting adding another instrument, until I see if my friend can come up with anything lyrically. If she can't I'll have no choice but to dive into this and carve away some room for another voice (too much going on already).

Thanks again,

Last edited by Steve P.; 07/13/09 08:02 PM.

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