Originally Posted by "TampaStan" Good
HiDee Mark!

Dog-Tired in the Early AM, I listened & re-listened..then Wrote.
Then couldn't find this thread...so..."Inspired By MK" Lyric is at Lyrics FB Board 3..."TIGHTER".

Far-From Tightly-Written...but your Root Melody's the Bed for the Verses..& that 2-note lick at the end of the Verses got Repeated..3X..as The Hook.

Thanks for the Inspiration, Amigo...WISH it had Musicatin'..but it's a fun read, anyways!

Best Wishes, Big Guy-Hug, & THANKS for the Challenge!
Stan


Wow Stan, an entirely different angle. I like "Tighter"...great one-word hooks can really make a song, especially rock.

One thing I want to make sure people understand is that I don't really have a melody here...I just have a backing band laying down the chords and the structure...finding a melody to sing is all part of the challenge here.

Is any brave soul interested in singing these fine lyrics that Stan and Nightengale have written? The lyrics help you to map out the melody, you know...

The more the merrier!

I'll post my original in maybe a week, thought I'm getting tempted to try out a different melody too, just because this challenge thing is contagious!

Thanks for playing everyone!

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