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Hey Big Jim.
what a fun song! love the lyrics.
my only suggestion is I would like to hear more vocal movement in some of the lines.
ex.
" the natives are restless tonght" in the first 3 uses, I was expecting his pitch to go up, but it stayed down, I think if he went up in pitch it would keep the energy of the song better.
the singer does start to variy towards the end. but I ( being a singer) would love to hear it sooner.
definatly hear this in a disney movie.
great job, good luck!
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