I'm diggin' this Jan - guitar really works well with this lyric, which is very nicely visual. Cool story too!

Really only one nit - I might have gone with something more like this:

Mothers cry, “Stay outta dem woods,
Dat woman, she be no good”
Still their sons seek out her truth
Striking bargains with their youth

As is, there is a momentary confusion because the "they" seems to refer back to mothers - though it is cleared up in the following line.

Is a minor thing - perhaps not worth changing.....

Very cool!

Scott

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