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50 Dollar Wedding Ring Tempo 85

By: Michael E. Lynch / Copyright 2010

V1:

We were young and dumb when I bought that ring,
I was still learning all the simple things,
Worked my fingers to the bone so you could, go to school

You got your education, but didn’t like my situation
all I got, were two wore out calloused hands,
I hammer nails all day, and I cut stone,--not sure how it would work with music to perhaps sing this as all I got were calloused hands from hammering nails and cutting stone...jmho on a change that may make it flow a bit better
you strut around with your Guccis on- I feel if you just said, you strut around with your Guccis on...would work, instead of Gucci pants. or say Gucci Jeans...? And stare at me like I ain’t worth a damn

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You took the couch, table, rocking chair,
microwave oven and the silverware, cat, dog, high def TV
And all you left, for me, was your 50 dollar wedding ring,OR to make it even more detailed, perhaps all you left me was your cheap Walmart wedding ring ?? just a suggestion, keep or sweep, as they say:)

V2:

Sure, I’m a little sad, thinking bout what I had.
But I can always replace everything I lost

I’ll just take this ring, trade it IN for a few George Straight Cd’s
And I’ll grab a case of cold beer on my way home

I ain’t mad at you, you see, I hope you find the man of your dreams
Maybe some joker with a PHD

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Bridge:

I can get another dog, I never liked to smell that cat
I’ll find a simple country girl, at least I’ll know where she’s at...maybe say it like this?? I'll find a good ole' (instead of simple, as simple could be also taken as simple minded, though I know you don't mean it that way, but say good ole country girl, at least she'll wanna stay where shes at? jmho

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