Well not so much a melody man, they all start sounding the same to me, my melodies that is!, and I think I misjudged the song in that there is a chorus and could be repeated, although I do like the AABA songs that musicals tend to do a lot, or easy listening people.

But let me look over it. I may make some suggs etc that you can take or leave, just think that if there is a melody giving suggs that shorten the lines ect might mess up a good melody so was wondering from that point of view.

Cheers

Alan

PS Did you check out Next to Normal?!?! Sorry but I seriously think it is one of the best musicals ever written....one of them mind you wink